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3rd Nov


crows strutting -
feathers like oil
in the sun
Form: Haiku
Region: Hungary, Middle-Europe
Season: Autumn / Winter
Category: Animals
Kigo: crows

Entry for #the-haiku-club :iconthe-haiku-club: 2010 November Saijiki Contest.
I decided to enter one of my 2010 November Haikuton pieces, because I'm satisfied with this one.

About the haiku:
The kigo I chose here is crows. We have great flocks of them here in Hungary.
They are very common from October to April. The old people say that if the crows fly into town, the real cold weather arrived.
This year it was cold in September, so crows arrived early.
Crows are one of my favourite animals because of their intelligence and beauty... and they make me think of autumn.
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011   Writer
Congratulations on coming third.
I love the image.
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Formel Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :hug:
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011   Writer
You are welcome! :hug:
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Itti Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the comparison to oil - it's original and yet at the same time you can see exactly that they are like that.
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Formel Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :hug:
The wonderful thing about crows is that they aren't just black, but very colourful and they look regal. (well, a bit) :D
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OritPetra Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011   Writer
Probably my favourite of the bunch. Simple, elegant, and evokes a number of a senses. Also, it's about crows. And I love crows. :D :heart:
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Formel Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :hug: I'm glad so many people like crows, watching them entertains me so much. :)
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phoenixleo Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Congratulations! :)

Your work has been featured in my journal and in my profile page!

Take care! :)
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Formel Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. :hug:
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phoenixleo Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011
You are most welcome! :)
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