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Discontent

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hot honey-black tea
steam curls around discontent
for the words escape...
searching blackbirds dig in dirt
one finds a fat grub, success
Form: Eastern Poetry, Tanka
Theme: spring, tea, blackbirds and poetry
Region: Hungary

My first time writing tanka. Also, I was trying to write one for the Haiku Club's Shining Wind contest but nothing works... I'm a bit stuck. :ohnoes:
I won't give up though. :)
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Leopold002's avatar
Smooth from start to finish.